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diff --git a/homebrew/campaigns/Dance of the Fallen/sessions/00 - The Beginning.md b/homebrew/campaigns/Dance of the Fallen/sessions/00 - The Beginning.md
index 474e53abf4a18c6e565612fef28654f58795b585..6d2aa926b3342b600ccf67ff49b8f1d7cbfbe8bd 100644
--- a/homebrew/campaigns/Dance of the Fallen/sessions/00 - The Beginning.md
+++ b/homebrew/campaigns/Dance of the Fallen/sessions/00 - The Beginning.md
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ 	- Meet up with [[Lili]]
 - The docks
 	- Meet [[Captain Griswald]]
 - Random Encounters
-	- [ ] Dock Brawl
+	- [x] Dock Brawl
 	- [ ] The Night Watch
 	- [ ] Oh Ship
 	- [ ] Missing Manifest

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diff --git a/homebrew/campaigns/Dance of the Fallen/sessions/01 - Slateford.md b/homebrew/campaigns/Dance of the Fallen/sessions/01 - Slateford.md
new file mode 100644
index 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000..29fb1f71d616b3c8042d793e8b96e86c81076c77
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+++ b/homebrew/campaigns/Dance of the Fallen/sessions/01 - Slateford.md
@@ -0,0 +1,14 @@
+03/17/2025
+
+The group entered Slateford, went to [[Slateford#Herbert and Gherbert]], and recruited [[Lili]].
+They went to [[Slateford#Brownwater Tavern]] talked to [[Rhys(sie) Boii]], accepted his quest, and headed to the Slateford Docks.
+They met [[Captain Griswald]] and initiated the [[Slateford#Dock Brawl]]. The enemies (incorrectly) assumed the party was part of the Night Watch, whom they were trying to kill.
+Upon returning to the [[Slateford#Brownwater Tavern]] they met and recruited Wong.
+
+For next time:
+- Better story hook
+- More choices, felt shoehorned
+- Let players describe crits (if they want to)
+	- Get a sense of who would like to describe finishers
+- More for Gersephone
+- 
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diff --git a/homebrew/cities/Slateford/Slateford.md b/homebrew/cities/Slateford/Slateford.md
index 5b5114e8f3d50a52c9359bccac9476d5c9040a82..c9a8e50947618b9f06f73dcf4efecc08ba32f8f9 100644
--- a/homebrew/cities/Slateford/Slateford.md
+++ b/homebrew/cities/Slateford/Slateford.md
@@ -15,11 +15,9 @@ ![vibe](SlatefordVibe.jpg)
 
 > The air is heavy with the scent of salt and fish, mingled with the earthy aroma of rain-soaked stone. A light, persistent drizzle falls from the pewter sky.
 > 
-> **Slateford** is a maze of narrow, winding streets paved with smooth cobblestones. These roads, slick with ever-present rain, require a careful step, especially when the occasional gust of wind sends rainwater cascading from the eaves above. The buildings press close on either side, their upper stories seeming to lean towards each other.
-> 
-> The architecture is a hodgepodge of styles, unified by the omnipresent slate roofs that give the city its distinctive silhouette. Most structures serve dual purposes—the ground floors house an eclectic array of shops, taverns, and businesses, while the upper levels provide modest lodgings for the owners and their families. Colorful signs swing in the breeze, competing for attention.
+> **Slateford** is a maze of narrow, winding streets paved with smooth cobblestones. The buildings press close on either side, their upper stories seeming to lean towards each other.
 > 
-> The streets teem with life, weather-beaten sailors with sun-bleached hair rub shoulders with quick-fingered urchins darting through the crowd. Sharp-eyed merchants haggle with customers, their voices adding to the cacophony of street cries, snippets of sea shanties, and the occasional clash of steel from a mock duel or an all-too-real disagreement.
+> The architecture is a hodgepodge of styles, unified by the omnipresent slate roofs that give the city its distinctive silhouette.
 
 
 ## The Docks